AfroUnderscoreStud's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Why Him?]

It needed to be longer.

It was too short, what you had was good, it was a nice way to go about doing what you did by making this flash, but to be honest it was a little too short, I liked what I saw, it was nciely done, especially the memories in the your thought bubbles, but you should have continued on showing more memories of him and then maybe showing what happened to you after you left the grave, it just would have been much more saddening and it would have been a much better flash as a result.

You got my respect for doing this though.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

1/5

[No-one world - Trailer]

Eh? Is that it?

You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.

Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.

Even for a trailer that was poor, it's raining, there's some text, then a woman appears and she fires a gun, THE END. That really was just completely pointless, nothing happened at all, if you were going to bother with a trailer you should have at least had something happening in it, as this was just completely eventless. The rain effects were very poorly done too, you shuld ahve used lots of little diagonal lines moving diagonally down the screen, rather than big diagonal lines moving left and right across the screen.

Congratulations on managing to achieve what surely is the lowest scoring Daily Feature, this has currently got 1.24 for it's score, I think the lowest I've seen before was at least 2.something.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[The Bloodlust(Preview)]

Too short and too fast

You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.

Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.

It moved too fast, you only saw some of the action for a brief second, it wasn't long enough for you to really make anything out and it was impossible to fully look at what was going on, but from what I saw it was just a same old, same old storyless, pointless violence stick movie, which just made making a preview to it even more pointless as you know exactly what to expect from a storyless, pointless violence stick movie, as each one is essentially the same submission. This didn't even have any sound to it, it really needed some as it just seemed really odd to be watching this without sound. You really should have made the scenes involving the sticks in this movie longer so that you could make out what it was that was happening properly.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[SHOCK]

Anything I can top in 5 minutes doesn't impress me

At first it didn't seem too bad, an alien ship comes down, yeah okay something funny or interesting could be about to happen, but no, the alien hit a guy in the crotch and left, it just wasn't funny at all, it's just an overdone joke that wasn't funny in the first place, some sound effects included in the movie would have been an improvement.

You say you made this while waiting for Street Life to load and well it shows, this is the kind of movie I could knock up in about three minutes if I wanted too and I could top it in five. So I guess it wasn't too bad for a rushed effort, it just needed to be funnier or interesting.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[ColdRevenge3]

Good, but a little too short

It was a good movie and was definitely the best in the series, I enjoyed the whole thing, I liked how it started with Joe taregting the guy but getting the wrong one, then having to kill another and then driving away from the homing missile in his car and eventually having to jump out, the whole thing was a good story and it made a good, fun to watch movie, but it was just a little too short, you should have shown what happened after he jumped out the car instead of just ending it, the only other problem I had with this movie was the fact that the sound was a little quiet, but still a ncie movie anyway, it's a shame you've decided to not make the 4th to this, I think you should though, I for one would like to see it.

And here's a question, what the hells going on with Joe, is he blind or not, in the first 2 he was, then in the remake of the 2nd it wasn't clear and now I'm pretty sure he isn't. It's pretty confusing.

Anyway, well done, good job, keep up the good work.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

3/5

[ColdRevenge2(FIXED)]

Good, the best in the series

Yeah that was good, definitely the best in the series, it started out being just Revenge 2 but with voices, but then I saw that you'd given it a completely different ending, this time not killing off the main character. It was a good movie with some good ideas, I particularly liked the part where the main characetr used a grenade in the dead bodies mouth, it was just a nice idea and it was really effective, also the guy blowing the bubble of blood seemed like a nice, different idea too and I liked it how the mian character gave him the gun so that he could kill himself to prevent the pain. The only problem I really have with this movie is the fact that before the main character was blind, but in this one it said he had a gangrenous arm, so what is it now? Is he blind? Did he have a gangrenous arm? Or is it both? It's hard to tell as with each episode so far you've completely changed the previous story, you really should have came up with one story and stuck with it rather than keeping on changing it, I knwo you never planned a sequel when you made the first, but you still should ahve made the second so that it made sense continuing on from the first one. Anyway, well done, good job, keep up the good work.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

3/5

[Unibomber (6 minute epic)]

Horrible, just horrible

A few of the jokes in it were okay but the majority of the humour was kiddy humour and overdone humour, this was like every terrible Newgrounds movie aspect rolled into one. You started out by having some little story about the unibomber but then you drfited away from that completely and just made a completely random movie. The sound quality was the worst I've ever had to experience, it really was just terrible, it was also really annoyin having that laughter/clapping sound played over and over, a few times would have been acceptable but it was used too much and it came too often.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[ride]

Random but not too bad.

It was random but it didn't really suck, it wasn't too bad but it could have been better, i liked the start where the things were falling with the umbrellas and you made it look like something completely different and it ended up being that they were in space and the white and green thing was the moon, but to be honest, the rest was kinda boring as you didn't have anything interesting going on and you didn't really have anything that made me thing or that caught my attention. The sound was fine apart from one part where the blue thing came in, that part just sounded really bad.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

2/5

[Dame-sama v. Warui-sensei]

That was terrible and completely pointless

It was just two guy's fighting and the animation was really horrible which just made there be no tension whatsoever and it just made the fight really boring, there was no point to it whatsoever and there really should have been some sort of reason for the fight to be taking place, you also should ahve ahd somethign in the background instead of it being just black, some music wouldn't have gone amiss either.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[BadGuys]

Random but fucking funny

It was a completely random funny full of pointless swearing and the odd NG-style word such as owned but instead of being terrible it was just funny as fuck and great too, you managed to keep it consistently funny throughout and it never got old, perhaps it was a little on the short side, but hey it was a short so that's no biggy, it would have been nice to see a longer version of this perhaps though, maybe you could have shown what happened next and had some more funny jokes, but it still worked really well as it was. Anyway, well done, great job, keep up the good work.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

4/5