AfroUnderscoreStud's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[MOTP]

Looked promising.

You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.

Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.

This game looked promising, but there just wasn't much in the demo, all you could do was talk to 2 different people and then you could enter a fight, but only the first round of it. For a game this was poor as you couldn't really do anything and even for a demo there wasn't much on offer, okay you got across the general impression of what the game would be like but you still should have included more in this so that there was something to do. The plot itself seemed alright but most of the jokes just weren't funny, a few of them were though. You also needed to have sound in this, as it was just really odd without it and it somewhat let the game down. It's been years since you made this demo but I feel you should go ahead and make the final version, I for one would love to see it. I see you're still active so you might read this review, you also say you're YOINK, so I'm assuming that you're YoinK_VineS.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[The Schwarzenegger Dance]

Is that it!?

There wasn't much to it at all, it was just yet another click on a pasted image to kill them game, there was no challenge to it whatsoever and it was just completely pointless. This time it was Arnold Schwarzenegger and you pasted his head on some girls and you had to shoot the chest and then the head, there was no challenge to it, it wasn't funny and there was no point to it either. To improve this you should have had some sort of challenge on offer, made it longer and you should have drawn eevrything yourself instead of using pasted images, as that always looks really poor. I liked how you could either snipe him or do it normallly, but due to the fact that there was no challenge and it was pointless it didn't do much for it.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[Reign of Darkness (Alpha)]

What you had was alright, but it wasn't finished.

You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.

Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.

What you had was alright, I liked the fact that it actually had a story and the game was also alright to play, but the problem is that you hadn't finished it, when I completed this I was dissapointed and confused, I was dissapointed because it had ended not long after it had started and I was confused because the end screen said that I'd died, when obviously I hadn't. The story to this movie, while nothing original was still nice, demon kidnaps a girl her boyfriend rescues her. The game was alright and it was fun to play but it could have been better, occasionally the projectiles that the enemies threw, after you destroyed them you'd still take damage, even though they weren't there in order to be able to damage you which was quite confusing. You also should have had health packs in it that would occasionally appear and you could restore part of your health if you managed to click on it in time, this was particularly needed for the very end part as there were three enemies and it seemed a bit harsh as you were unable stop two of their attacks from hitting you unless you killed them. You also should have had some sort of purpose for the heads to be there, like if you clicked on them you should have got something instead of it just being an added feature that wasn't particularly easy to hit anyway.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

2/5(What this game deserves in terms of how good it was)

As this game was a Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work I shall vote 0 for it despite the fact that it earnt a higher score, sorry but those are my rules when it comes to Demos/Trailers/Previews/Unfinished Work

0/5(What I shall be voting for this submission)

[Windows 3000]

A poor windows parody.

It was just a poor windows parody, I normally hate these things anyway but this one seemed especially bad as there wasn't really much in it and there wasn't anything original, I did somewhat like the word feature though that allowed you to type text in as that's something I haven't seen done in one of these before, but aside from that it was completely unoriginal and there weren't a lot of options. I didn't like the My Computer scenario as the explosions went on for too long, it should have been much shorter than it was. Perhaps you could have found a way of adding more sound into this, perhaps having Windows Media Player in it and having a joke to go with that would have helped this out in the sound area, as there was just very little sound in it.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

["Get Ross Snyder Drunk"]

That was pointless.

There was just no point whatsoever to this, click on a drawing of a nottle a few times to see webcam pictures of Ross drinking from a bottle, occasionally with Tom in it as well along with some text at the bottom, then when you'd done all 4 you saw Ross leaning forward and some sick you drew coming out of his mouth, it was just completely pointless and it wasn't funny at all. You should have done something that was actually funny with the webcam pictures and made this "game" more interactive in some way as clicking on bottles 4 times didn't exactly make this a game. You also should have added some sort of sound to this as it just seemed really odd without it.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[Pokemon Shooting Gallery]

I guess it wasn't too bad.

The gameplay was a bit boring and repetitive but then that's what you expect from a shooting gallery game. I guess it wasn't too bad a game but there wasn't really much to it, perhaps you could have added levels or something, like you have to kill so many in one level in order to proceed to the next, it would have added more to the gameplay and they'd have been a reason to keep on playing as you'd want to try to get to the final level.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

2/5

[would u date this woman?]

There wasn't really anything to it.

There just really wasn't anything to it at all, just click on some text and the picture morphs. First off the head was too obviously pasted onto the woman's face and you could tell from the face that it was a guy anyway, so it just didn't work at all. Perhaps you could have made something out of this by having some text saying Would you date this woman? and then two boxes you can click on, one that says yes and one that says no, obviously you'd have needed more than one person though, you could have pasted people's faces onto bodies(like you did here but better) some being women and some being men andit could have been some sort of guess if it's a man or a woman game, you also needed to add some sort of sound or music into it.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[Fony Stereo]

Well it was just a stereo.

All it was was just a stereo, you could listen to 6 different music tracks and that was it, there wasn't really anything interesting in it, it was just listening to music, perhaps you could have had some sort of short animation piece that would be on a loop to each track or something, just so that there'd be something going on on screen. I did like how you were able to pull out the plug though, most people wouldn't have had that as an option, they wouldn't have even had the powee button as an option either. Some of the sound was of a slightly poor quality which kind of let it down.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5(I was tempted to give it a 1, but when it comes down to it, it isn't very interesting)

[HydroBLAST]

Really poorly done.

It was just a really poorly done side-scroller game, the enemies took too many hits in order for you to destroy them and the character you controlled just moved really slowly, perhaps using the mouse to move instead would have helped out with the movement of the character and you also should have made the enemies take less hits so that they didn't take absolutely ages to kill. It was really annoying how the game would keep setting the quality to low, as having to right click and select high each time did just get really annoying. The sound whenever your ball character took damage was also annoying as it was just a really horrible sounding, low quality scream, you should have used a different sound for it, one that wasn't so irritating.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

[Steve & Steve Dance Party]

Different, but pretty boring.

It was different from everything else as you could select how each person's head, torso and legs would move and at first it wasn't too bad, it was kinda funny that you could have them having major spasms, but there just wasn't really too much going on and it was actually pretty boring, it did keep me kinda entertained for a short period of time, but there just wasn't much to it and there wasn't anything about it that was particularly fun. For what you set out to do with this though you got it practically spot on, it just could have done with some more actions and a background, possibly even ones you could alternate between would have improved it.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

1/5