Looked promising.
You shouldn't have submitted this as it isn't the finished version and I feel that demos/trailers/previews/unfinished work don't deserve to be submitted to Newgrounds as they are not the finished version, you should wait until you finish something before deciding to submit it.
Demo/Trailer/Preview/Unfinished Work rant over.
This game looked promising, but there just wasn't much in the demo, all you could do was talk to 2 different people and then you could enter a fight, but only the first round of it. For a game this was poor as you couldn't really do anything and even for a demo there wasn't much on offer, okay you got across the general impression of what the game would be like but you still should have included more in this so that there was something to do. The plot itself seemed alright but most of the jokes just weren't funny, a few of them were though. You also needed to have sound in this, as it was just really odd without it and it somewhat let the game down. It's been years since you made this demo but I feel you should go ahead and make the final version, I for one would love to see it. I see you're still active so you might read this review, you also say you're YOINK, so I'm assuming that you're YoinK_VineS.
Peace Out, Afro Stud
0/5