Score: 8

"An old joke with a brilliant twist."

submission: 50 Llamas Day

date: October 19, 2005

I loved it, the whole thing was great, I just loved the whole randomness of it all with the llamas and the guy going to work with them and singing a song. When the guy got to work and you made the 'wrong day' joke I thought that that was going to be the joke to it and at that point I felt a little letdown as it wasn't anything original, but then right at the end you went and gave it that brilliant twist and it just brought it right back up to standard. I know you could only have made it a minute, but I'm still going to say this, it needed to be a bit longer, you should have made a whole song routine of the guy singing about the llamas as it would have increased the length of the movie and it would have made it funnier. The only real problem with this though was the sound, most of the the time it was good but there were occasions where it was kinda crackly every now and then, which kind of let it down, it was still a great movie though. Anyway, well done, great job, keep up the great work.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

4/5

Score: 8

"That was pretty great."

submission: BadGuys2:AppeasingTheGods

date: October 19, 2005

Again just like with the first one it was pretty great, I'm not too sure which one was the better one though, the first one was much funnier due to funny jokes done in a really random way so the first was better in that respect, but then this one was better as there was more in it and while it wasn't as funny it was more enjoyable, so I kinda slightly preferred this one over the original. I liked how you recycled some of the stuff from the original episode and put it into a different context, it was really nice to see. I also liked the start where you thought only one guy was gonna get hit by the dart but then the other one did too. I also liked how you used some stupid jokes in it that actually became funny due to the fact the characters found the jokes funny and you'd be laughing at how they reacted rather than the actual joke itself, just like you intended. There wasn't one flaw to this everything was just done nicely and there's no aspect to it that I'm going to say needed improving. Well done, great job, keep up the great work.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

4/5

Score: 1

"There wasn't much to it."

submission: [ - - Run On - - ]

date: October 18, 2005

I don't normally like these kind of things anyway, but this one was especially bad as you didn't do anything visually entertaining, it was just simply moving circles, morphing circles and circles changing colours you should have tried doing something interesting with it instead of just doing simple stuff. It would have been better if you'd had a different background as well as it just looked really poor the fact that it was white, even just simply having it black would have been enough. You also needed to make sure that the animation was consistently in time with the music as it only was a few times throughout the whole movie and if you're going for these style of movies the most important thing is that all of the animation is in time with the music.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

Score: 2

"Is that it? It needed more to it."

submission: SDRNR 1 1/2

date: October 18, 2005

This one seemed to be better than the last two, but just like with the first one, the second it looked like it was going somewhere you just suddenly ended it you should have continued on with it. Again it would have been better if they'd been some sort of story behind it instead of it being just yet another pointless violence movie as pointless violence movies are never interesting, a movie needs story to it in order to get the viewer's attention. This one seemed to be really random and I wasn't too keen on the randomness of it all, i didn't like the sex joke either as it was just far too random, a woman walked in and got her tits out for no reason whatsoever. The sound quality was better this time, but it still could have been better than it was as it was a little on the poor side.

I realised I missed out my score for SEX DEATH&RNR2 in my review, just to let you know, I gave it 0/5.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

Score: 1

"Just yet another pointless violence movie."

submission: SEX DEATH&RNR2

date: October 18, 2005

It was just yet another pointless violence movie, two guys went around killing people for no reason and it just wasn't very interesting at all. The start of this wasn't too bad as it looked like it was actually going somewhere and that there was going to be some story in it, but then it just soon became just yet another pointless violence movie, it would have been much more interesting if there was some story behind their killings. You used too many awful sex jokes in this that weren't funny in the first place, okay you only used two but you should have just stuck with the one as it got a bit stupid on the second one. I liked the part where the dynamite was in the lift and the Smurf called the lift and how it blew up the second it got to his floor, it was a funny idea and it sure as hell worked, it was definitely the highlight of this movie. The sound quality in this was dreadfully poor and it needed much work, the fact that it was so poor just made the movie feel somewhat worse than it actually was.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

/5

Score: 3

"Poor throughout until near the end."

submission: !!shooting spree#1!!

date: October 17, 2005

The movie just seemed to be yet another pointless violence movie, it would have been nice if you'd had some story to it, like instead of him just doing random killings there should have been a reason as to why he was doing it as it would have made it more interesting. I did like the part where the guy shot towards the screen and how you made it look like he was going to shoot the viewer but it turned out to be some other guy he was shooting at. When you brought in the old man I guess that part wasn't too bad as there was some sort of story as to why the old man wanted to kill him, I wasn't too keen on how you made the setting the Matrix as it just seemed like a pointless excuse for having a Matrix style scene within the movie, it would have been better if their fight had just been a normal one, the fight wasn't too bad though, but that's only because there was story behind it. You ended it too abruptly though, the second the main character killed the old man it was all over, you should have shown the old man fall to the floor and then shown the main character's reaction as it just seemed really odd the way you just suddenly ended it, as it seemed unfinished. You needed to have some sound effects in this movie as it seemed really odd that a gun was being fired and that there was a fight scene that was, other than music, completely silent.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

1/5

Score: 1

"That just wasn't in the least bit funny."

submission: Disgruntled Pikashit

date: October 16, 2005

That was just awful, a laod of shit jokes within one movie, shit jokes aren't funny they never were and they never will be. This had the ability to be not too bad a movie, Ash and Pikachu end up in jail, it doesn't sound too bad at all, but unfortunately it was just filled with shit jokes and other pieces of terrible humour, I liked the escape plan though with using the Pokeball to allow Pikachu to escape. The text at the start went over the pictures you drew, which just looked really horrible, you should have sorted that out. You needed to have sound in this as it just seemed really odd without it and it made it seem even worse than it already was. If you'd had just steered clear of the awful humour that was within this and made some jokes that were actually funny, this could have ended up being an alright movie.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

Score: 2

"It needed to have something happening in it."

submission: nudity

date: October 16, 2005

Nothing happened, some guy went on a weird machine thing, then there were loads of things you could click on and various random things would happen, but all that happened was you got to see some text some images of outlines and at the end the machine blew up, you should have some sort of interesting things happening when you clicked on the various parts of the machine as then they'd have been some sort of thing happening in it that was interesting. You also needed to have some sound, as it just seemed really odd that the whole thing was silent.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5

Score: 2

"Stupid at times, but kinda funny at others."

submission: Spud's a Goner

date: October 16, 2005

It may have been a completely awful movie but there were moments when the humour wasn't actually too bad, mainly towards the end with the constant recycled Wendy's tits joke, it was funny because it was repeated. It was completely stupid though and there were jokes in it that were just so god damn awful, the Pilchard shit joke for example, shit jokes aren't funny they never were and they never will be. The pasted images you used were of a poor quality and they also still had the outline around their edges which just made them even worse. I think that this movie could have been a fairly good movie if you'd drawn everything in it yourself and got rid of the jokes that were awful in it, perhaps you should remake this drawing everything yourself, it could end up doing alright in the portal. When Spud got shit and you had the view from the snipers on the roof you couldn't make out what Spud and Bob were saying as you had their speech text backwards and the text went too quick so you couldn't read it. I was tempted to give this a 2/5 but then I thought that that was a bit too high due to the sole use of pasted images and some of the awful jokes that were used.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

1/5

Score: 2

"Is that it? Nothing really happened."

submission: w o o d s

date: October 16, 2005

All you did was show some pasted images and some text and you had some music playing along with the occasional sound clip, you never did anything with it, nothing happened at all, if you were going to do a pasted images movie you should have at least had something going on in it, or even better you could have drawn everything in it yourself and had something happening. When you scrolled left along the first pasted image the animation was really choppy and it just looked really poor.

Peace Out, Afro Stud

0/5